Wang Jiawang was named Wang Jiawang because the ancestors of the Wang family have been in the small mountain village for generations, and they have been native farmers for generations. The elders hope that he can prosper the Wang family and represent the Wang family out of the small mountain village. Wang Jiawang finally lived up to the hopes of his fathers and villagers. Through his own efforts, he was admitted to a good university. After graduation, he was assigned to the unit and stayed in the city as he wished. Wang Jiawang can play the role of the top leader in his thesis, talent and ability, but it happened that Wang Jiawang is a good person that the teacher in the book talks about every day, integrity and kindness ...

. Just because of these personality characteristics, he will not secretly enter the relationship and open the back door. There are no background figures in the family, and the personnel in the unit change from one session to another, batch after batch of promotion, always without his name. However, whenever there are major and arduous tasks in the unit, it is none other than him. He is really a good player in business. Everyone knows this unit up and down, inside and outside. It's not that the family doesn't enter the house, even his wife Xiaoling has the kind of upright and upright character.

Xiaoling came home from work very late as usual this afternoon, carrying a small vegetable basket in her left hand and a large bucket of oil in her right hand. As soon as I walked to the door of the community, Mrs. Zhang, the chief of the section upstairs, walked towards me, dressed in luxurious silks and satin, wearing pointed high-heeled leather shoes on her feet, and twisting her waist gracefully. The French perfume on her body was suffocating from a distance. She pulled out her voice at Xiao ling all the way: "yo! Sister-in-law just got off work? " "Yes Yes. " "Buy so many things, also don't ask our Lao Zhang to drive to help you back, quite heavy, I'll do it! " "No, no! " words just fell, hand stretched out in the past, let Xiaoling refused with a firm tone, also can't change the situation. I saw Mrs. Zhang quickly grab the oil drum and the vegetable basket, the bamboo basket and her limited edition Italian handmade bag rubbing back and forth, which did not affect her "Helping People " . Mrs. Zhang walked quickly towards Wang's house, as if she was wearing a pair of comfortable sneakers instead of pointed heels.

Xiaoling was blindsided. In the past, she was called a village girl in her mouth. She walked with her head held high and defiant Mrs. Zhang looked like a different person today. Before she could return to her mind, aunt Li on the first floor, carrying a big bag of small yellow ox dry bar, stood at the top of the stairs and smiled and said to Xiao ling: "her sister, when she met the fair in the morning, the small yellow ox dry bar from the countryside, was rushed back and begged me to buy it cheaply. This is not, where can we finish eating? You help me take some to eat, is helping me. " is strange, Xiaoling thought, for so many years, I am not doing housework all day to make the floor gurgling affect her rest of the hillbilly? How did this become her sister? In the community, everyone seemed to meet her intentionally and inadvertently, smiling and bowing.

Xiaoling walked to her door, and several members of the community were at her door. Xiaoling thought to herself, oh, no! Are the two bags of plastic bottles I picked up and put there to be complained again? A closer look, everyone gave her the door repair, the lamp repair, even she reflected two years of bad stair handle, not only to repair up, but also attentively on the floor of the bright paint it. This is not, as soon as I saw her come back, I was caring and attentive, and I was kind and peaceful.

Early the next morning, Xiaoling got up as usual to go to work. People in the community on the road seemed not to see her. Everything went back to its original appearance. Confused Xiaoling planned to tell her husband about this at noon. At noon, Wang Jiawang came home from work for dinner. As soon as he entered the door, he told Xiaoling that the new head of their unit had taken up his post. He came from other provinces with the same name as himself. His name was Wang Jiawang. (Luo Meiyan)

Tutor Comments (Xu Shuifa, member of Zhejiang Writers Association, writer of short stories): If you don't care about the precision and conciseness of the novel language and the theme, this short story is relatively mature in terms of style. The author laid the groundwork first, then peeled off the cocoon layer by layer, incisively and vividly showing the neighbors upstairs and downstairs who usually do not pretend to be Xiaoling, highlighting all kinds of snobbish words and deeds of pleasing Xiaoling and looking for opportunities. The ending is the classic Henri-style ending of Europe , which makes Xiaoling and readers suddenly realize that yesterday's events were all "Butterfly Effect " brought by Wang Jiawang's name. Unfortunately, this butterfly is not real.

The biggest problem with this short novel is the obsolescence of the subject matter. The anti-corruption novels are very popular with readers and the author's attention. The themes and structures involved in this article have long been written by others, so it is difficult to make new achievements. Another example is that the original intention of the beginning is to pave the way for the following. Unfortunately, it is rough and ordinary, lacking the features of "Exclusive " , which is too common to raise readers' reading interest.

If the author can renovate the old theme, really put new wine in old bottles, or find a special theme of his own, extraordinary thinking processing, language imprinted with regional characteristics, and unique structure innovation, then he may have his own sky in the creation of small novels.