Thief
Release time:
2020-09-22
thief
a remote small town, an early autumn evening.
A minibus stopped by the side of the road and two people came up, an aunt with a pocket and a young man with a schoolbag. After entering the carriage, the young man did not look for a seat, but anxiously looked for something in his pocket and glanced at the conductor from time to time with great embarrassment. Finally, the young man smiled and took out two one-dollar coins from his pocket and handed them to the conductor. The conductor tore up a ticket for him. There were two people in the carriage, a middle-aged man in a straw hat and a slightly fat man with glasses.
Suddenly, the middle-aged man in a straw hat grabbed the hands of the man with glasses and shouted, "What are you doing? " It turned out that the slightly fat man with glasses actually put his hand into the pocket of the young man with the bag.
The bus stopped. Hearing that a thief had been caught, many people gathered around. People were excited and rebuked the thief. The man with glasses tried to explain something, but no one listened to him.
Someone called to the police and they walked up to the man with the glasses.
"Hello, please show me your ID card!"
"Excuse me, I don't have my ID card with me today. I only have a teacher's card now. I am a teacher."
"What a teacher who steals money from a child!"
"You can say that you are still a teacher. You are a parasite!"
From time to time, someone in the crowd ridiculed the man wearing glasses. Among them, the loudest shout was the aunt with her pocket on her back. However, the young man with his bag stood there calmly, and he said nothing.
"Have you lost anything, lad?" The policeman turned around and asked the young man.
The young man blushed and looked embarrassed and said: "I just arrived in this county yesterday, and I was admitted to the county No. 1 middle school. I just reported today, and I haven't received any grants from the school ...... I don't have any money on me, I haven't lost anything. "
"Have you not lost your ID?" asked the police. The young man began to look for papers in his pocket. Suddenly, two hundred-dollar bills fell out of his pocket, the pocket into which the man with glasses put his hand.
"This is not my money, I have no money!" The lad shouted.
The crowd suddenly quieted and time seemed to freeze. Everyone looked at the teacher. The teacher was silent, his eyes on the ground, and his right hand unconsciously helped his glasses.
It's all clear.
The police were surprised. It was the first time he had encountered someone putting money in someone's pocket in his years as a policeman.
The policeman raised his right hand, solemnly saluted the teacher and returned the teacher's certificate to him. Then he asked the crowd present to disperse.
People started to go their own way.
The teacher was leaving too, but the aunt with her back pocket stopped the teacher. She took a big red apple out of her pocket and gave it to the teacher. "Take it, you are a good man. Take it. This apple is too big, I can't sneak it into your pocket ..." (Hong Zhiwei)
Tutor's comment (Xu Shuifa, member of Zhejiang Writers Association, short story writer):
I always think that a good short story can not be separated from a wonderful and touching story core. That is to say, the plot of the novel should have "deceptive " . This deception is naturally not the original meaning, but makes you willing to be deceived into reading it and can't stop it. This kind of situation is generally like this. The content of the story involves unfamiliar fields and can stir up the curiosity of every reader. For example, the factors of outer space exploration that human beings have not understood for the time being, the popular theme of "tomb robbing " in previous years, etc. The second is the pure plot of ups and downs, twists and turns, one link closely linked to one link, constantly unexpected, can not help but want to watch it.
This article is about a relatively common positive energy story that is helpful. The plot is tortuous and the ending is unexpected and happy. Just after careful reading, I found that there is an old disease that beginners are easy to commit, that is, they only care about how unexpected and fascinating the plot is, and forget one thing that all literary works pay special attention to when conceiving the plot, that is, the plot must withstand scrutiny, and the plot must be not only legal, but also reasonable. The problem with this article is that it conforms to the rules of composition, but it cannot withstand the scrutiny of human feelings and human nature. If you make some adjustments in the scene setting and plot preparation, you can still write a good short novel.
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