Sending off
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2020-07-22
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"Even though I'm so familiar with Chinese culture, sometimes I still don't understand you Orientals. " Ela seems to be choking, putting down the fork with the apple pie in it and raising the glass to take a sip.
"In fact, I don't understand why you, a Polish, like to eat American apple pie. " I was also rushing to eat without looking up.
"Seriously, isn't there an old Chinese saying called 'Antuqian ' ? There was no one left. "
"can't stay ..." Even though the words "waiting to die " didn't come out, I still regretted it, and the originally unhappy farewell banquet immediately put a layer of sad atmosphere on it.
2049 , the area where I lived was rated as the area with the best quality of life in China. Why? This is not a commendable thing, because a disaster that swept the entire fourth spiral arm of the Milky Way, humans had to abandon their homes and wander to the stars. And my hometown is the last part of China to board the ship. The line "" seen in the classic movie appreciation class a few months ago is still fresh in our memory, no matter where the final result leads human history, we decided to choose hope ".
The country of Ela does not have the capacity to provide universal deep space immigration, in other words, Ela is one of those left to die. In this era when remote meetings have become a common practice, she specially came to see me by shuttle today to see me off and I saw her off.
"Let's go. " We finished our meal in silence, not so much the meal as the feed. Sadly, I will not comfort people, so the atmosphere will continue to be dignified as time goes.
Ela is even less comforting. She sobbed quietly in my arms all the way, as if the last moment would not come without facing it. But everything has an end, whether it is the tide of the big times or the clutch of the little people. Now looking back, the whole human struggle, in front of the ruthless universe, really became "small globe, several flies hit the wall " .
I stood at the gate and kissed her more warmly than ever before. Before she broke down, I stuffed what I had prepared into her pocket. It was a paper certificate I had specially applied.
Her big sparkling eyes asked me, what is this?
"Look again when you arrive. "
"No! What do you mean! "
I pushed her through the gate before she could react. She tried to push her down the escalator retrograde, but was stopped by the staff.
I was speechless and waved at her.
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"Dear Ela , by the time you read this message, you must have taken off safely. I did our marriage certificate without you, because it can give you my boarding qualification ...... and this sentence is what I want to tell you on the way, there is an old Chinese saying called ' this peace of mind is my hometown ' .
In a shuttle full of Chinese, a foreign girl with light green hair wailed. Her tears dripped on the floating screen, causing ripples in which the face of a teenager was vaguely visible. To the attention of the stewardess who came to comfort her, the teenager had a determined eye. (Zimo)
Tutor Comments (Xu Shuifa, member of Zhejiang Writers Association, short story writer):
Love and war are ancient themes of literary creation. This article obviously belongs to the former and tells a sad love story.
At present, many short novels can roughly guess the end after reading the beginning. On the one hand, life is the same. It is understandable that everyone lives under the same sky and the same or similar stories happen. On the other hand, it may belong to the author's poor imagination or rough conception, resulting in mediocre works with similar plots or content crashes. This article surprised me a little. After reading several sections, I couldn't guess the ending correctly. This should be the exquisite idea of "unexpected and reasonable " when setting up the plot of the short novel.
look back at this little novel and suddenly think of a familiar saying: success and failure. This short novel is about the life and death parting of a pair of lovers. After reading the dialogue in front of me, I can't feel the atmosphere and emotion of a pair of lovers parting. I think this is just a daily dinner for a pair of ordinary friends. It is this ambiguity that leads to my guess of the wrong ending. I think if the author can make some foreshadowing or hints in the previous dialogue and narration, let us feel that this is a pair of affectionate lovers. Even in the face of life and death choices, we would rather leave the hope of living to each other. All the relaxed dialogue is just to better cover up the sadness of parting. This kind of light and dark line treatment makes the ending reasonable.
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