In our hometown, we all say that the age is false. Most of the students were born in 1970. The group leader said that rounding, everyone can call them 50 years old. It is suggested that all students celebrate their 50th birthday together. At first, I was against it. What kind of birthday is not too old? It is nothing more than giving people who like to drink another chance. However, the group owners have their own reasons: the ancients said that "the destiny is known at fifty". We have been busy in struggle for decades before the age of 50. Now we have finally achieved little success, and our actions and thoughts are relatively free. It is the best time in our future life. Knowing the destiny is knowing the destiny, but when I heard that an old classmate died prematurely in an emergency, I still couldn't help panicking, and I was more eager for peace of life than before. At this age, everything should be natural. That is to say, it is really a wonderful thing not to give yourself psychological pressure, not to force yourself, to maintain a positive and good mood, to get together with a group of old classmates who know each other well, to have a chat, and to spend this turning point in life together. The

group leader issued a Jianghu order to gather the students to celebrate their birthdays together and recruit live actors, hoping that everyone could give some programs to enliven the atmosphere. Eating is just a formance, and gathering is the goal. Zhaoxia told Yuqin and I that we wanted to make a program together. I remembered that we often saw clips in the past TV plays. At the factory and rural party, there were always people who made up and performed three and a half sentences. The performance was not limited to the venue, the form was short and concise, and the content was timely and timely. The burden thrown by the actors inadvertently often made the audience and me laugh in front of the TV play. I suggested to them "play three and a half sentences", and the three hit it off.

We all graduated from Menlou Zhuang Middle School. The three years of good time in junior high school have left warm memories in our lives. Since graduation, everyone has gone their separate ways and been carried away by fate. Many people have never met each other again. At that time, there was no phone call, let alone WeChat. If you want to know the news of another classmate, you have to ask around, but there may not be results. Now, we all gather in a WeChat group and meet every day. At that time, the male and female students basically did not speak. When they met again many years later, the former stuffy gourd turned into a talker, and the students laughed and laughed every day. The 50 years of spring and autumn are about to become the past. Life is both bitter and happy. There are many stories to share with you on the way to growth. Everyone recalls the past and talks about the future. I am very happy. I took time as the axis and compiled the students' gathering and separation into three and a half sentences. After editing, Zhao Xia and Yuqin were asked to revise it. Zhao Xia said that your smile was not enough and should be shorter. Zhao Xia simplified and adapted it on the basis of what I wrote, and the lines were indeed much happier. After the lines were decided, the actors were selected and the roles were divided. Zhao Xia proposed to invite Hou Ge, who was humorous and had a sense of joy, to come to the last half sentence. Hou Ge gladly accepted our invitation. In order to express my love for my hometown, I suggest that this performance all speak Pinggu dialect, so as to be more grounded. I have been away from my hometown for many years, and the changes in the language environment have made me less able to speak my hometown dialect. I have stepped up my practice word by word, and I have also recorded and listened to it repeatedly to train my on-site reaction. The effort pays off. At the end of the performance, my Pinggu dialect did not make any mistakes. You know, because everyone is far away, we didn't even have a joint practice on this program. The time of

passed quickly, and the day of gathering finally arrived. The group leader and the students of Switzerland arranged two big tables of sumptuous dinner for everyone. Before the banquet, the group leader delivered a speech, thanking this era, so that everyone can get together every day on the Internet and spend a good time together. Each student also said his birthday wishes to everyone and himself. We blew candles and sang birthday songs. The whole room was surrounded by happiness. After we were full of wine and food, we still had a lucky draw. Everyone kept taking photos and smiles bloomed on everyone's face.

When everyone is still not satisfied, it is time for our three and a half sentences to come on stage. Rui suggested that we should strike the gong before the last half sentence, which can attract everyone's attention. We all feel good, but where can we find the gong in the hotel? We used our quick wits to borrow a basin from the waiter to serve as a gong, but what to knock? We made another mistake. We tried with chopsticks and couldn't knock. Finally, Zhaoxia was clever. She picked up the empty wine bottle on the table and knocked at the bottom of the basin. The sound was crisp and neat. That was it. Rui was responsible for knocking this special gong with Hou Ge. During the performance, Rui's exaggerated beating action and Hou Ge's deliberately elongated and funny drag made the whole audience burst into bursts of happy laughter. The thoughts of the students followed us back to our alma mater, reviewed the past and returned to the scene. Especially after Hou Ge shouted "Sa Huan Er", Rui was accompanied by continuous percussion accompaniment, which brought everyone's mood to a climax.

We grew up together, the most beautiful time in three years, studying in the same school, gatehouse.

At that time, he didn't like to talk, and his deskmate also drew the 38th parallel, not to mention boys and girls, who were shy.

In the summer of 87, I hurried to go my own way. I didn't even say goodbye and graduated.

From then on, they went to school, started a family and had children, were busy supporting their families and earning money, and were in a hurry.

set up 87 WeChat group, everyone gathered together, temples have been stained with white frost, reunion.

Only the figure goes far away, and what worries me is always the hometown feeling. Childlike innocence is still there, small fart child.

Beijing, Tianjin, Hebei, every corner of the trip, say good morning, good night, happiness.

We have been working hard, getting up early in the morning and moving bricks in the dark, talking about body, mind and happiness in our spare time.

50 opens a new chapter. We will meet on August 17. Brothers and sisters will be happy and happy.

Life is over 50. We are walking on the road of youth. Only by working hard and being optimistic can we live up to this good time. (Liu Hairong)

Tutor Comments (Fu Shuqing, Vice Chairman of Jinhua Young Writers Association, Director of Pujiang County Writers Association, Signed Writer of Xinhua Interview Network):

The author and his classmates blew candles, sang birthday songs, played three sentences and a half, played music with special "musical instruments" at the classmate party... Through these vivid words, we can feel the strong feelings of the classmates, I can also feel that although the author and classmates are in the year of destiny, they still have a young heart and a passion that has not retreated. As the author says, "We are on the road to youth", yes, what's the harm of being over 50 years old? As long as you are the same as the author, you are kind, yearning for beauty, and full of longing for the future, age is always just a number, which must not be an obstacle to the way forward, nor a cage that imprisons your dreams. Today we are always younger than tomorrow, now is the best time.

The theme of this "Meeting in Young Years" is very good, and the writing is relatively smooth, but it is slightly lacking in overall control and layout, the emotion is not controlled enough, the distribution of pen and ink is uneven, and the theme seems not very clear, which makes people feel "top-heavy. Obviously, from the title and the text, we can see that the author would like to express the treasure of the three-year classmate time, the nostalgia for the past youth years and the infinite longing and yearning for the future, which is also the eye of this article. However, the place where the author uses the most pen and ink is the process of preparing for the reunion and the scene of opening classmates, which will make readers mistakenly think that the author is only writing "an unforgettable reunion. If you come straight to the point, you can write directly from a lively reunion in concise language, write again at the climax, focus on describing those three years of high school time that loves crying and laughing in flashbacks, and finally add a little exaggeration to end with the feeling of "walking on the road of youth", which will surely reach the hearts of the people more directly.