So panicked
Release time:
2020-08-14
So Panic
At noon, the train was moving slowly. People in the sultry car were drowsy. I also hung my head and wanted to narrow my eyes. Suddenly, I found an old man in the opposite seat staring at my schoolbag with strange eyes. My mother! I suddenly trembled all over, is someone staring at my bag? My baby?
I subconsciously held the bag tightly in front of my chest. In fact, there is nothing of value in my schoolbag. I just carry a certificate of "three good students" that I just got, which I took back to show off to the elders in my hometown. This is my baby, don't lose it. Looking closely at the old man opposite, he had a goat beard, a peaked cap and a bad smile on his face. At first glance, he was not a good man, much like a spy in a movie. Did he come to steal my baby? I need to be more careful. After a while, the old man stood up, walked past me and touched me with his arm. I was so nervous. How did he know that there was a treasure in my schoolbag? Did he find my treasure? I quickly changed the direction of the schoolbag and covered it tightly with my hands. In less than two minutes, the old man came back and sat back in place. His eyes were fixed on my schoolbag again. What is he doing? What the hell is he doing? I can't even breathe. When the
train arrived at a small station, I saw a passenger in the front row get off the train, so I quickly dragged my schoolbag to sit in that seat, which was a sigh of relief. At this time, I carefully opened the bag and found that the certificate was still there. I smiled, patted my chest and told myself not to be afraid. But after more than ten minutes, the old man seemed to follow me and sat opposite me again. I couldn't help but get nervous again. Finally, when the train arrived at its destination, I mingled with the people who got off the train and ran to the wharf as if I were running away. I was in a long line to buy tickets to another wharf. I thought, this can finally get rid of the spy tracking.
This boat is traveling on Qiandao Lake, and the scenery along the way is extremely beautiful. Sitting on the boat and looking at the scenery outside the window, my thoughts have drifted to my beautiful hometown. My friends who used to play together may be waiting for me at the entrance of the village. At this time, I found that the old man with a goat beard and a peaked cap appeared in my line of sight again, and he was standing on my left back, his eyes spinning incessantly, as if looking for something. Did he follow me so quickly? Did he really come to steal my treasure? Was he a thief or a spy? I couldn't help but panic again, trembling all over and hugging my schoolbag tightly. After a while, the old man came forward, scanning his eyes. I picked up a magazine from the ship and covered my face and looked out the window to hide my panic. A few minutes later, the old man was gone. At the moment, I am no longer in the mood to enjoy the scenery outside the window, and I have no time to miss my hometown friends any more. I just want to get off the boat earlier and get home safely earlier. When the
cruise ship was about to arrive at the dock, a message came from the radio: a plainclothes policeman caught habitual thieves on the cruise ship and found valuables such as wallets and watches. please take good care of your belongings at any time. When the ship arrived at the dock, the old man in a peaked cap appeared again. He was escorting a young man to the dock with two policemen. Ah! It turned out that the old man was a plainclothes policeman in makeup. I was wrong about him. By this time he had removed the goat beard and looked much younger. The thief in custody was a young man about the same size as me, and he also carried a schoolbag. No wonder the plainclothes police kept staring at me. He must have regarded me as a thief.
Ha ha, false alarm. (Hong Zhiwei)
Tutor Comments (Xu Shuifa, member of Zhejiang Writers Association, writer of short stories):
is naturally smooth in writing, the story goes step by step, and the result is unexpected. In other words, the "baggage" at the end shakes well. In addition, the author's writing skills are good. Just reading the whole article, I feel that "I" has been "on the way home" and "changing the scene", that is to say, the character "I" has been following the progress of the story. Therefore, this article is a complete story, but It is not a novel in the true sense. In addition, the title is written eye, which should have the meaning of outline or play the role of finishing touch. The title of this article is too casual.
The choice of theme is also very important for a short novel. If the theme cannot be innovated, reverse thinking can be considered to process the material, which can bring readers a new feeling through detail innovation without losing a shortcut. In a word, the subject matter, structure, language, details, etc., no matter which aspect, give readers a new experience, even if it is an old bottle of new wine, it will be recognized by readers.
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Editor's note: During the National Day, the "Jinhua New Observation" column of Jinhua TV Station launched a series of reports on "National Day New Observation: New Development of Old Enterprises" to understand the new developments of those old enterprises that have grown up with New China in the new era. October 3 broadcast of the "peak of the 'centennial 'ideal", about the development of the peak group and the future direction of development. The "century" ideal of the peak Jinhua TV reporter Wang Dujuan Jiang Qian host: speaking of Zhejiang Jianfeng Group Co., Ltd., Jinhua people are no stranger. The older generation of Jinhua people are more familiar with, may be the predecessor of Jianfeng Group-Jinhua Cement Factory. Open the first old photo 58 years ago, surrounded by mountains and a rice field in the middle. Old Jinhua can see at a glance that this is the Wise Temple, 8 kilometers north of Jinhua City and east of the former Zhuangtou of Luodian Town. In August 1958, the first group of pioneers came here and built Jinhua's first cement factory on a desolate hillside of 16.94 mu with a pair of hands and warm blood. From the earliest cattle-drawn ball forming machine to the electric ball forming machine, from pure manual labor to machine substitution, it took 26 years of hard work. By 1983, the annual output of peak cement reached 120000 tons, the output value was 6.75 million yuan, and the profit was 2.4 million yuan. In these 26 years, the cement plant has experienced a difficult period of the country, and the ten-year catastrophe of the "Cultural Revolution" has finally ushered in a good time of reform and opening up with tenacious vitality, laying the foundation for steady development in the future. Looking at these old pictures,
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2020
07-31
Jianfeng won the Zhejiang Industrial Award
A few days ago, we learned from the relevant departments of Zhejiang Province that the company won the 2016 "Zhejiang Industrial Award Silver Award". Zhejiang Industrial Award was established in 2014 and is selected every two years. The purpose of carrying out the selection and commendation of the Zhejiang Industrial Awards is to thoroughly implement the "August 8 Strategy", comprehensively implement the innovation-driven development strategy, speed up the industrial transformation and upgrading with the "four for three" as the starting point, and commend the adherence to the scientific concept of development. adhere to industry, conscientiously fulfill social responsibilities, establish a modern enterprise system, and take a new road of industrialization with characteristics. The evaluation work is jointly organized and implemented by Zhejiang Industrial Economic Federation, Enterprise Federation, Entrepreneur Association, relevant provincial industry associations, municipal industrial economic federations, enterprise federations, entrepreneur associations, and relevant units. The award review committee is composed of relevant government departments, provincial "three committees", relevant provincial industry associations, and experts in industrial economy, management, finance, taxation, quality, environmental protection, safety, technology, and law, the participating enterprises are comprehensively evaluated from the aspects of industry demonstration role, scientific and technological innovation, economic benefits, resource utilization, environmental protection, brand strategy, product quality, production safety, social responsibility, enterprise management, human resources and so on. "The enterprises that have won the Zhejiang Industrial Award this time are all outstanding enterprises that have made significant contributions to the promotion of Zhejiang's economic development; they are all leading enterprises, backbone enterprises, and high-growth enterprises from different industries, representing the scale of Zhejiang's industrial development. The direction and leading spirit represent the highest level of Zhejiang's industrial development." According to the organizers related negative
2020
07-31
Peak Cement Successfully Enters Lancang Airport Project
News from our newspaper On September 26, the first batch of airport runway cement produced by Yunnan Jianfeng Cement Company was successfully delivered to the Lancang Airport site, which marked another important step in the expansion of Jianfeng Cement in the southwest Yunnan market. Lancang Airport is located in Donghi Town, Lancang Lahu Autonomous County, Pu'er City. It is the center of the "three counties" and "Pu'er Green Triangle" tourist areas of Lancang, Menglian and Ximeng, with a wide range of radiation and obvious location advantages. The project is a national "Twelfth Five-Year Plan" construction project and a key construction project in Yunnan Province. It was approved by the State Council and the Central Military Commission in January 2013. It started construction at the end of November 2014 and is expected to be completed in April 2017. The current project of Lancang Airport is designed to meet the target of 250000 passenger throughput and 750 tons of cargo throughput by 2020, including the construction of a 2600-meter-long and 45-meter-wide runway, the construction of a new 3000-square-meter terminal building and 4 apron parking spaces, including communication, navigation, lighting, meteorology and other supporting projects. The total investment of the project is 1.533 billion yuan. Upon completion, it can be used for Boeing 737 series, Airbus A319 and A320 series, MA-60 and other passenger aircraft take off and land. Since the start of the Lancang Airport project, Yunnan Peak has listed it as an important goal to strive. Compared with ordinary cement, special cement for airport runways has the characteristics of small shrinkage, strong wear resistance, good frost resistance and low alkali content in addition to the requirements of ordinary 42.5 Portland cement. To this end, Yunnan peak in the project to strive for at the same time, the collection of technical forces to tackle the problem, in the clinker composition to determine, cooked.
2020
07-31
Peak Cement Successfully Enters Lancang Airport Project
News from our newspaper On September 26, the first batch of airport runway cement produced by Yunnan Jianfeng Cement Company was successfully delivered to the Lancang Airport site, which marked another important step in the expansion of Jianfeng Cement in the southwest Yunnan market. Lancang Airport is located in Donghi Town, Lancang Lahu Autonomous County, Pu'er City. It is the center of the "three counties" and "Pu'er Green Triangle" tourist areas of Lancang, Menglian and Ximeng, with a wide range of radiation and obvious location advantages. The project is a national "Twelfth Five-Year Plan" construction project and a key construction project in Yunnan Province. It was approved by the State Council and the Central Military Commission in January 2013. It started construction at the end of November 2014 and is expected to be completed in April 2017. The current project of Lancang Airport is designed to meet the target of 250000 passenger throughput and 750 tons of cargo throughput by 2020, including the construction of a 2600-meter-long and 45-meter-wide runway, the construction of a new 3000-square-meter terminal building and 4 apron parking spaces, including communication, navigation, lighting, meteorology and other supporting projects. The total investment of the project is 1.533 billion yuan. Upon completion, it can be used for Boeing 737 series, Airbus A319 and A320 series, MA-60 and other passenger aircraft take off and land. Since the start of the Lancang Airport project, Yunnan Peak has listed it as an important goal to strive. Compared with ordinary cement, special cement for airport runways has the characteristics of small shrinkage, strong wear resistance, good frost resistance and low alkali content in addition to the requirements of ordinary 42.5 Portland cement. To this end, Yunnan peak in the project to strive for at the same time, the collection of technical forces to tackle the problem, in the clinker composition to determine, cooked.
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