Losing is a blessing
Release time:
2020-08-14
is lucky
. I heard that my classmate's old money has made a fortune in doing business abroad. This year, I took advantage of the Spring Festival holiday to visit relatives and friends in my hometown. By the way, I gathered some good classmates to catch up with the past.
As soon as the students met, they chatted with their parents all over the world. It was very lively. Old Qian said that he had not returned to his hometown for several years. He gave everyone a red envelope to help him. I tried my best to poke at my cell phone and only got 0.22 yuan. Some students got 50 or 60 yuan.
I was thinking about how I had such bad luck. I grabbed the youngest. Old Qian stood up with mirth and announced his decision. He said that he would bring back a lady's handbag from Italy. If anyone gets the smallest red envelope, this handbag will be given to her as a consolation prize.
I was blindfolded at that time and said I didn't dare to accept such a precious gift. Old money said: "Our usual business field is also the same, a man to eat to eat to suffer, but also to eat to lose. Sometimes on the surface, you may suffer in something, but also may contain very good business opportunities. This is my experience in the past few years outside the struggle, the road of life is also so, now with everyone to encourage." Applause at this time... (Wang Meiqin)
Tutor Comments (Xu Shuifa, member of Zhejiang Writers Association, writer of short stories):
The beginning of the article is natural and smooth, just like opening the lid of a story, making readers look forward to it. However, after reading it, it was very disappointing. The full text was almost a joke, especially for the latter part of the truth, which felt more procrastinated than the joke. In fact, the focus of this story should be on increasing the interesting things that old Qian's classmates are willing to suffer losses when they meet with everyone, as a foreshadowing, and then designing some rumors that old money is doing well in business during this period of separation from everyone. This is in line with the characteristics that old money is willing to suffer losses and that losses bring smooth business to him. Finally, when the climax of the party was designed, Lao Qian proposed to give out red envelopes and "I" robbed the smallest red envelope and accidentally got a famous brand handbag. This naturally completed the shaping of the character image of Lao Qian, and at the same time echoed so much foreshadowing for Lao Qian.
In particular, it should be reminded that the novel should use exquisite plots to shape the characters, and can express the words and deeds of the characters with pen and ink, so that readers can feel the details that can "speak" and find the artistic sense. Don't use a large section of preaching to plump up the image, in that case, the effect will be counterproductive.
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