Green Jujube Fragrance
Release time:
2020-08-14
Green Jujube Fragrance
The woman settled in-laws and son's dinner early and hurried to catch the bus. It took her nearly three hours' drive to deliver some change of clothes to her husband who worked on the other side of the city.
Sending clothes is an excuse for her to make up for her in-laws. My husband had not been home for two months, and only made a phone call in the middle. Although he lived in the dormitory of the factory, he lived in a room for one person. Could it be... A woman's heart is like a cat living in her heart, with her little paws scratching incessantly. When
pushed open the dormitory door, her husband was squatting on the ground fiddling with a pile of spare parts. When he looked up and saw her, he was surprised and delighted. He immediately stood up to cook noodles for the woman. The woman stopped him and said that she was not hungry and had to catch the last bus back immediately.
Although her husband was disappointed, he tried to hide it. He cheerfully showed her the pile of things spread out on the ground and said that he planned to build a small bicycle for his son, which would save a lot of money. The woman smiled. She was too tired to speak, but her hands did not stop. She began to clean up her husband's messy room. She knew that what she was worried about along the way had not happened.
Soon, the woman was going back. Her husband did not know where to take out a bag of things and gave it to her. She looked at it and found that it was green dates. It was not fresh and began to turn red and wrinkled. The woman frowned, but heard her husband say: "This is the factory to receive customers when the leftover, know that you like to eat green dates, with the reception of the elder sister to discuss a good, I help her clean up, the rest of these green dates are mine. Unfortunately, recently busy no time to go back, green dates have become red dates, good, just as sweet."
looked at the woman for a moment, and the husband said: "It's not that I don't want to give up the money to buy you fresh green dates to eat. I just want to save a little bit. Let's save more money, buy a small facade nearby, and do some small business. I don't want to earn much money. The family can be together, and I feel at ease."
The woman insisted on not letting her husband send her and came to the bus stop alone. Before the last bus came, the woman hugged the bag of green dates and leaned against the stop sign wearily. Suddenly, as if she had been scalded, she hurriedly took out an envelope from her pocket, tore it to pieces three or two times and threw it into the trash can next to her.
That's a divorce settlement. Three months ago, she ran into her first love, which is now developed, and could not help a fierce material and spiritual offensive. She agreed to divorce and his request to renew her relationship. Today, she is not so much to catch her husband's "derailment" as to find the last straw for her conscience. But now, she is very glad that she has kept the last bottom line. The last bus of
came. The woman got on the bus calmly and sat down. She knew that the bus would take her home, so she leaned against her seat, sniffed the fragrance of green dates and took a nap. (Lin Lixuan)
Tutor Comments (Xu Shuifa, member of Zhejiang Writers Association, writer of short stories):
The article is not long, and it is very smooth to read it all at once. In particular, the burden "divorce book" at the back shakes very well, giving the full text the feeling of a bright future. Obviously, the full text embodies the author's two major advantages. One is that he can make up stories and know how to turn the story around. The twists and turns of writing can give readers a sense of novelty. The second is to observe carefully and be good at discovering the highlights of life, which has become the theme of the novel. What's more gratifying is that the author has made some amends for the old-fashioned theme of marriage, that is, he skillfully uses the prop "jujube", especially the green jujube turns red, which has a moral meaning, can it be understood that jujube goes from green to mature, and their life has become more happy and happy from then on? The only drawback is that the ending is somewhat procrastinating, and the novel should try to give the readers some room for imagination. As long as you tell me to get on the bus and go home safely, the home here has a whole new meaning. In addition, the article wrote that "what she is worried about has not happened". We already know from the following content that the woman is actually here to catch the rape. The word "worry" becomes contradictory to the divorce letter in the following article. It is appropriate to change the word or quote it. The title is only one word "jujube", which is more concise and leaves room for imagination.
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