Lao Tian and his people
Release time:
2020-08-14
Lao Tian Qiren
Lao Tian, 60 years old or so, medium build, thin, dark skin, a little limp in his right foot, walking around with a simple and honest smile on his face. He is a cleaner in the village, pushing a garbage truck through the streets all day long.
Lao Tian has never married a wife in his whole life. He is also the only low-income household in the village. He wears sloppy clothes and is usually taciturn. In today's snobbish age, everyone is unwilling to take a reason to him.
Xiao Fang, the newly married daughter-in-law of my next-door neighbor's son, is young, fashionable and beautiful. She usually wears jewellery and walks with her head held high, looking defiant. Once, Xiaofang was eating melon seeds at the door of her house, and the melon seeds were thrown up all over the floor. Tian just saw her and said a few words to her. She shouted abuse, saying that he was a lowly person and had no right to educate her, and that the dog was meddling with the mouse... Lao Tian didn't talk back, swept the floor clean and left silently.
About a month later, a "notice for admission" was posted on the bulletin board in the village, saying that Lao Tian found a gold bracelet with the pinyin letters engraved with the owner's name on it while sweeping the floor in the village, which had been handed over to the village party secretary. the owner should go to the village office building to collect it. Those who saw it said, I'm afraid the bracelet is worth 7000 or 8000!
Two days later, the beautiful daughter-in-law Xiaofang hurried to the village office building with a bright red pennant in her hand. Under the witness of the village secretary, she handed the pennant to Lao Tian with a red face and could not say anything... (Wang Meiqin)
Tutor Comments (Xu Shuifa, member of Zhejiang Writers Association, short story writer):
full text character image is clear, language is smooth, the story is complete. Several scenes have a particularly strong sense of picture. At first, Mr. Tian appeared with only a few strokes, giving people an image of a sanitation worker standing alone because of his special occupation. Then he wrote about the domineering and domineering fashion woman Xiao Fang, who thinks he is superior to others, and the scene of sending pennants later. He talked naturally and smoothly. In this way, the two characters of Lao Tian and Xiao Fang have been sublimated in the bracelet.
Beginner novels, being able to start with portraying characters is a shortcut to success. The only drawback is that the subject matter is a bit old-fashioned and it doesn't feel fresh to read. Another thing is, like Xiao Fang's harsh words about Lao Tian, don't use narration. It is better to have a direct dialogue with you and me. Long novels attract readers by their plot, while short novels win by small and short details. In addition, for some old themes that others have already written, the plot must be reversed, so that they can be new and give people unexpected joy.
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